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08 March 2007 @ 01:52 am
 
Title: Sisters and Brothers
Author: Rev
Rating: Teen
Fandom/Claim: Criminal Minds/ General Fandom.
Table: Five
Prompt: Family
Warnings: Spoilers for JONES
Disclaimer: This is not mine. I'm just having a bit of fun with it. May slightly be OOC because I'm tired but the dialogue just came to me in my head. And I may have spelled Bill's last name wrong.


"I think I'd like to come back here someday," said JJ as she took as seat next to Emily in the plane "In a non official capacity. It's a great town."

"And what exactly is it about The Big Easy that makes you so suddenly fond of it?" asked Morgan as he stifled a smirk "The good food, the good music or is it..."

"A certain deep voiced detective?"

JJ looked over at Emily and made a face. "I don't know what you mean." She didn't realize that a blush was creeping up over her cheeks.

"What exactly did you two talk about?" asked Morgan "I mean...you were pretty much attached at the hip through the whole case."

"I've worked with cops before!"

"Yes, but how many of them have you given your personal cell number too?" asked Reid with a ghost of a smile.

"You too, Reid? I thought we were friends. Where's the loyalty?"

"We're all friends here, JJ," said Morgan as he stood "We just want to know exactly what young Detective Lamontane's intentions are for our dear Jennifer."

"Oh, you are enjoying this. Aren't you?"

"Little bit."

"He is nice looking," said Emily quietly to JJ "And he's got that voice."

JJ laughed softly and nodded. "Don't forget the accent."

"He really is rather taken with you. He kept calling you Honey."

"He's southern. He calls lots of women Honey."

"Not me. He never called me honey."

"Well...no offense Emily, but you're not exactly the sort of woman a man calls honey unless they're seeing them."

"That is not the point."

"Then what is the point?"

"Bill and you. Do you think there could be something there?"

JJ frowned and shrugged. "I guess, I mean...I guess I hope so." Oh, that felt strange to her to say but it was true. "I mean, there is something about him that I can't stop thinking about and he seemed to feel something for me."

"The man didn't stop staring at you for more than a few seconds most of the time we were there," said Morgan.

"You are enjoying this far too much."

"It's just nice to see you like this," he said smiling softly "You are far too pretty of a girl to be alone."

"I'm not alone. I have you guys."

"We're family."

She smiled over at Reid and nodded. "Yes. You are."

"And if it helps," he said "I liked Bill."

"So did I, " said Emily.

JJ looked over at Morgan. "What about you?"

"He's not good enough for you."

She laughed. "He's a cop. A good cop. A honorable cop. What's wrong with him? And weren't you just saying I'm too pretty to be alone?"

"JJ, you're my friend, you're my colleague and while we may get on each others nerves occasionally, no one will ever be good enough for you in my eyes. Same thing with any of you."

"Aww. The big brother I never wanted."

She sighed softly and ran her hands through her hair. "I don't think it matters much anyway."

"Why?"

JJ looked out the window as the plane took off. "Because here I go and there he stays."
 
 
 
snufflesdbear (Tamy)(Allie the Sylum Gator)snufflesdbear on March 8th, 2007 02:19 pm (UTC)
Oh, that was cute and sweet and sad all at once. I thought JJ and the cop were cute together "Can I borrow your hand, honey?" And JJ just trustingly reaches down to him! *swooooon*

*cocks head* Not sure how I got to this comm, but off to check it out. *is confused, but happy*

"The bigbrother I never wanted" LOL! That bunch really is a family.

Shawnshawngf on March 8th, 2007 10:12 pm (UTC)
Fantastic. I'm all about any JJ centric fics. Thank you, this was wonderful.
Kelsey: Reidatari363 on March 8th, 2007 10:18 pm (UTC)
"Because here I go and there he stays."


Awww. So sad. What a cute fic. They are a family. I like that. Morgan is the older brother, Emily, the older sister, Reid and JJ the youngest.
jadesfire2808: Reid/Physics magicjadesfire on March 9th, 2007 12:19 pm (UTC)
I enjoyed this a surprising amount (not my usual thing at all...) but you really caught something of the dynamic between the team plus there's some cracking lines.

"The big brother I never wanted." is just right. :D Really nice work.
patch_tankpatch_tank on March 11th, 2007 03:48 am (UTC)
Aw, cute. I like!

-Patch